Oh wow, Caroline! I really had no time this afternoon to read anything, but Sara had mentioned your story to me and said it was truly awesome. She didn't lie!
I love the banter between Lois and Clark, so very S2; the way Lois babbles to explain she doesn't babble was very cute, and then there was this thought of hers:
<He's quitting the Planet and moving across the country. He's getting married. He's quitting the Planet, moving across the country to get married. To Cat.>
... which made me go ROTFL.
This section was written in a very witty way, and then it shifted to something extremely sweet and romantic. What a smoochie!
Kaethel