Thanks guys! I only put that note at the end of part two because it had been a few days since I posted the first part and... <crickets chirping>. The majority of the story is PG, but I didn't want to go to the effort of cleaning up my act if no one was reading.
Clark is being a doofus. Lois could probably mellow a little (but I think she's justified in her grudge).
I hope I'm not being presumptuous by assuming that they will eventually kiss and make up.
Nope. Not presumptuous at all.
If all goes well I should have part three up this afternoon.
Thanks again!