Oh, wow. Is Lois heroic or is she heroic? Wow, is this a script for an action movie or a thriller/conspiracy movie?
You make my breath catch, Raven. Okay, this part wasn't so dark, so do I call you Smirky now? Maybe Smaven? (Okay, so what's next? Smirven? Smirken? Naah, I fear it will be a while until your story feels like any sort of smiley to me.)
But I'm impressed! Wow! Keep up the excellent job, but remember that I can take only so much (so if you don't hear from me for a while, your story has likely knocked me out....
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Anyway, Hugin and Munin, the ravens owned by Odin, the foremost of the Norse gods, say hello.
Ann
