The calm before the storm or FDK Darkest Dreams 15 - 12/12/06 10:24 AM
Somehow I just feel like this is the calm interlude before the storm. Especially since I know you have at least 24 chapters.
<DJ takes a deep, steady breath>
Wow, I needed that.
But I want you to know that I was literally yelling at Lois the last half of that chapter to please get Superman out of the car and let him lay in the sun, for goodness sakes. She has him all trapped up inside that car where he can't get his sunshine! Poor Clark!
Oh, and so glad to see that I was right about the shoe. Way back in (what chapter was it) when you mentioned Superman's boots and her shoes, I thought "Hit someone with the heel of your shoe, Lois. They won't get up from that."
Nice chapter... but not nearly long enough... now, uh, when is part 16?
-- MR
<DJ takes a deep, steady breath>
Wow, I needed that.
But I want you to know that I was literally yelling at Lois the last half of that chapter to please get Superman out of the car and let him lay in the sun, for goodness sakes. She has him all trapped up inside that car where he can't get his sunshine! Poor Clark!
Oh, and so glad to see that I was right about the shoe. Way back in (what chapter was it) when you mentioned Superman's boots and her shoes, I thought "Hit someone with the heel of your shoe, Lois. They won't get up from that."
Nice chapter... but not nearly long enough... now, uh, when is part 16?
-- MR