Oh, boy... I truly hope that I'll never become such a horrible doctor.
Great part...really angsty. You did a great job in portraying both Lois and Clark's fear. I was biting my nails.
A quick note...you'd normally take the bone marrow sample from the "iliac crest", yeah, great, just another strange word. Okay, I did read pelvis a few times, so I guess that word is okay. The leg has a *lot* of muscles.
But anyway, freedom of the author rules.
!!!!!!!!!!!!!!Poor Clark!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Get back soon and please get Clark out of this situation!!!!
