Hi,
Great part!
I like Marisol and Los.
Clark walked out and ran into his twin daughters. “Any trouble finding it?”
“No, it’s like they called to us.” Chloe smiled.
Clark nodded. “I don’t doubt it. Thanks.” He gave them both hugs. “What are you going to do the rest of the day?”
What do you mean "they called to us"?
Clark laughed. “Yes, fifteen year-olds can be relentlessly nagging.”
I thought they wore older than Zarel and Jon that already graduated and are old enough to get married?
Los blushed furiously. “Yes, many young ladies have… what do you say… thrown themselves at me.” He smiled. “But Marisol… she intrigues me. She showed interest, but she didn’t… throw herself at me.”
Clark chuckled. “I doubt she is overly taken with your ‘royal’ status.”
Los nodded. “Oh, yes, yes. Of course. I’m glad that she doesn’t.” He blushed again. “Do you know that I’ve had two young ladies sneak into my bedroom at night? And they… wanted..” He paused. “I quickly had them ejected from my room.”
Cute!
More ASAP, please.
MAF
