Nancy, I read and liked this chapter. I think it's really interesting that you have given Jon a Kryptonian disease (or condition?), a problem which runs in the House of El and which has already forced K'al to have surgery, and will eventually force Los to go under the knife, too.
However, I have to tell you that I'm feeling increasingly exhausted, and things are just piling up and up at school. Up until now, I've tried to write feedback on most stories, and often rather detailed feedback, too. I feel I can't do that anymore, because right now I can't allow writing LNC feedback to turn into an obligation.
Please understand, Nancy. I promise I will keep reading your story.
Ann
