great post, chris!
good job with cj's moral soul searching, and i love lois's reaction, especially this:
That had to hurt, she thought miserably. Winning an argument – any argument – could never be worth the pain she'd just inflicted on him.
i also love what you did with jack.
he doesn't show up too often, but you write him really well.
nice job with the flirting and such in the conference room.
lol about the bet.
looking forward to seeing more of this, especially the big break-in. i'm really wondering how you're going to handle things with cj's powers. that should be interesting to watch.
Paul
p.s. for myself, let me say this: don't worry about the "roll call." respond to what you want to, and don't worry about listing names or whatever. you've got better things to write.
