Hi! It’s been a long time since I commented on the forum, but today I really felt the urge to do so.
It’s a pleasure to read your work again, Nan!
You don’t know me—I’m relatively new to this forum and I hardly ever write anything other than the occasional comment—but I read a lot. Your stories are the kind I find myself reading over and over again (yes, that's how addicted I've become; reading is truly an obsession for me).
Here are my non-expert observations:
I feel that, for anyone who hasn't read the previous stories in a while, it might be a bit confusing to recognize the characters without rereading them. Perhaps there could be some sort of summary?
I love that the kids are already considering uniforms for themselves; you never know when they might be needed.
I loved finally finding out whose voice they heard in their minds. For a while, I thought it belonged to Alex, but then I realized there was still at least one more super-kid left to meet.
I know the story has shifted its focus toward Clark and Lois’s children and all the super-kids left behind after the visit from the New Kryptonians, but... could we see a bit more Superman? I’d love for the kids to be able to help him at some point—maybe as a team?
Right now, I feel just like Po when he met the Furious Five. Sorry, I couldn't help but mention that.
Two more things before I go: my husband just found out about you; I shouted, "Nan is back!" at him, and he replied, "Who?"
Spanish is my native language, so I apologize if anything is misspelled; I’m learning English through Duolingo, but English isn't really my strong suit.
Signing off now—sending you a huge hello!
