Hi, everybody:
I'm pleased that so many people wanted to see the first offering for my story, but you should know that this is an early draft. I am not so conceited that I think anything i write is above reproach ( heaven forbid) but I would really appreciate some constructive criticism so I can bring this story up to the level of some of the others I have written. I know the readers and writers on this board are both intelligent and creative, having written here for a number of years. I have not written for some time, so I am counting on you to help me achieve what I need to do with the story.
So, can anyone here help me out with some thoughts?
Nan
Last edited by Nan; 09/25/26 03:32 PM.
