Oh my goodness! What a chapter! Mentioning my personal dreamboat Harrison Ford was such a temptation, I swear, I thought Indy was gonna step out of time, bring the bullwhip and pull them both up to the surface! Purr! The only people who would have been a bigger surprise was if Dr. Alan Grant and Dr. Ellie Sadler showed up. (Sniff!)

My only complaint. Why oh why did you interrupt the kiss? Talk about dusty steam. goofy There was so much dust, dirt, pebbles and rocks I started coughing from the overload. But another kiss sealing this new aspect of their relationship would have been epic.

And then… Lois gets out and it looks like Clark is gonna get buried alive…again! He cannot survive another cave in. The Man of Steel desperately needs sunlight. Awesome story!

Okay… gotta get to the next part. Yippee!

Morgana

A writer's job is to think of new plots and create characters who stay with you long after the final page has been read. If that mission is accomplished than we have done what we set out to do, which is to entertain and hopefully educate.