UltraWoman, lol. I had to interrupt them one more time, just to stay true to the show. wink
Great guessing! Thank so much for taking the time to comment on this one!


Peixinho, I'm so glad that you liked this one! And I really appreciate your replies!

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Nooo, Clark! Why did you say that?

It still stings? lol

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That's right, Lois, be vulnerable in the dark and give him more clues

I was sooooo tickled when I realized I could give Lois the ability to be an open book and let Clark see what was really happening for this whole scenario.

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Wow, I didn't think he would actually have the courage! I loved it.

I went back and forth on this, but I think she's giving him enough to be confident.

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I can't believe she basically went with "You're a man, I'm a woman. You want me to draw a diagram?" lol

rotflol

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Present perfect strikes again...

But it's just so useful!

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A perfectly reasonable thing to think when your leg is bleeding but is numb, so you can't feel anything. Not even joking, it's probably something I would think too

Same. And if it's numb, she's fiiiiine... wink


Morgana, Harrison Ford really IS a dreamboat! And Sam Neill, too. Both definitely heroes! I haaaaad to interrupt them. But this is chapter 11 of 16, so still so much more to go! I'm so glad you're enjoying this one!


Bakasi, so happy that you liked this chapter! The beginning was a lot of fun for me! And Clark does get a little fatigued, I think, with constant super-output holding up those rocks, and zero sunlight. Thanks so much for reading and commenting!


Anna, I do love a solid cliffhanger! And I really probably would let something happen to Lois -- just nothing she couldn't recovery from, or I couldn't turn time back for, lol. So glad you liked this chapter!


Verity, thank so much! I wish I had a special trick for it. I guess I just really try to listen to their voices and then extend it a little further than the show would take it?


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