/peeks in/
Marks story as
KSaraSara
Because she can't help herself.But that's not her way of doing m-dashs and ellipses. This cannot be Sara. There's also no heart listening.
And it's set in London during the Blitz. I trust Mary to be able to research the hell out of it, but would she change her m-dashing? She changed her sentence spacing, though. And the story is really long. Goes with
lovetvfan
because comparing it with Fried Mars Bars, it's the same punctuation style

Michael