Hi Evie!
You're definitely right here, actually. But I had to set up my little foil.
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Looking forward to reading your WIP!
Umm...part 1-3 of the hopefully 4-part WIP are up over yonder - "PML - The Whole Story". Sara's been
hounding gently encouraging me on part part 4.
Oh, man, I laughed out loud at this. That's such an easy joke, and it just cracked me up.
Because I'm guessing this would get dangerous as time goes on. I just drop them in hot water in these stories and move out!
Yeah, so, Lois & Clark, you just had fun. Now, go on and figure out how you get yourself out of this mess. Tada
Michael
You know, I'm really grateful for this comment - I wrote another short last night where Lois is distinctly not dumping a wine glass over someone's head. She needs to resist in that one for silly reasons like 'plot' and 'continuity' but I think I need to start helping her behave much worse that I've been writing her. Maybe that'll be another challenge - let Lois break things.
I have a scene and story where I got stuck after Lois's inner thought on Clark ended with "Clark might be a bit messy at times, but at least he knew how to heel".
Well at least ONE OF US managed to get Henderson on this thread. clap Just breaks my heart when I can't add him into a story.
That's not embarrassing - that's a tremendous compliment!
I've been trying to work on not over-writing the sections between dialogue. So... I wrote a chapter without any dialogue at all. Naturally. wallbash
Thank you for taking the time to read an respond so thoroughly.
It's always such a pleasure to walk through stories with you!
Aww...you're very welcome!
Michael
