This story is a master class on how to communicate everything to the reader without using dialogue. Your descriptions set the mood and let us know exactly how everyone was thinking and feeling. Honestly Lex was such a creep! Clark was soothing. Lois took a good long hard step and realized Lex ain't the one.
Brava!
Morgana
A writer's job is to think of new plots and create characters who stay with you long after the final page has been read. If that mission is accomplished than we have done what we set out to do, which is to entertain and hopefully educate.
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