Originally Posted by Anna B. the Greek
Awww, poor Jimmy!!

I must say, knowing what the challenge was about, and with you describing all the great things that Jimmy had going on, I got such a huge feeling of dread! When Caitlin was mentioned, I started thinking she'd refuse his proposal.

And then you mentioned the motorbike, and I was like "oh no... oh no..."

Excellently done! Though again, poor Jimmy!!

Keep writing!
AnnaBtG.


Thanks, Anna! I was actually hoping people would begin to think Caitlin would say No to Jimmy's proposal, so that the accident would be more of a shock. Glad you enjoyed it and thanks for reading!

Battle On,
Deadly Chakram

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