Awww, poor Jimmy!!
I must say, knowing what the challenge was about, and with you describing all the great things that Jimmy had going on, I got such a huge feeling of dread! When Caitlin was mentioned, I started thinking she'd refuse his proposal.
And then you mentioned the motorbike, and I was like "oh no... oh no..."
Excellently done! Though again, poor Jimmy!!
Keep writing!
AnnaBtG.