I liked all four of your stories. I like how you write them in first person. In the first story, I didn't realize at first that Lyn was Lois, so I wasn't quite happy that she convinced Clark to go to dinner with her, but I liked her way of checking to see if Clark was an obsessed nut or not.
As for this particular story, you had me going initially, thinking that Lois was leaving Clark, but I'm glad they are both happy together.
I too am wondering where you'll go with this, because it is in Clark's nature to help, so will they stay in Metropolis? Will they report under there new names? - If so, won't people recognize their writing styles and put two and two together?
Unless Lois changes her look again, won't she be recognized on the street?
On the other hand, if they leave Metropolis and Superman leaves too, won't people just see who's new where he pops up again?
Thanks for writing!
Cheryl
