Wow, Dave! I'm awestruck at this story! I cannot wait to read more!
Having Clark "remember" his married life with Lois is such a fascinating twist! I, too, am dying of curiosity to find out how he's remember something that hasn't happened yet. The alternate universe theory certainly sounds possible, or maybe there's some sort of H.G. Wells shenanigans about to happen?
Your writing of their emotions, especially Clark's (which we feel firsthand) is just amazing. I wanted desperately for him to be right, for him to be married to Lois and have a child together. I guess it can't be true, but... I hope that they will be able to get back on the track to that, at least.
Please, write and post more soon! I can't wait to read it!
