Lynn, this was absolutely awesome! I will say ditto to everyone's comments, except for this teeny little part of Julie's
Even though we have more than enough TOGOM rewrites
no no no no no. I don't think we can ever have too many TOGoM rewrites. Every time we think it's all been done before, someone comes along with a whole new twist - like Anne did just recently with
Not All Geese Are Wild, and you did with your marvelous
Save Me, Superman.
But as fantastic as these two trailers you've done have been, you probably need more practice, right? Lots and lots more practice... And there are lots of stories on the Archive. Don't hesitate to practice on one of your own - we don't mind at all!
Wonderful job...
Kathy
