Excellent, Lynn! The music's great, and I'm very impressed by your choice of video clips -- especially the ones of Lois watching TV. I know the original context, but these fit *so* well into the fanfic. I could almost see the wheels turning in Lois's brain as she starts thinking, there's no blood...
Of course, I then had to read the story again and was up til midnight, and it's all your fault!
PJ