Hi,

Great part. notworthy

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He wondered if he was ever going to have a relationship that wasn’t tainted with shame. Even what he had with Lilah, as special as it was, was something that his parents would have never approved.

Love was complicated. He’d been hurt when Lilah had pushed him into dating. It was the best way to keep the secret, she’d said. No one would suspect them if he was dating girls his own age. But every moment he’d spent away from her felt like a betrayal.
eek OMG! This Lilah is a pervert of minors she took advantage of Clark confusion?


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The nights he’d spent waiting for his parents to live or die had forever imprinted that smell on him.
eek A traumatic experience for little Clark!


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Ed was their foster father. He hadn’t been the same since his wife left him.

“Ed can’t even pull himself out of a bottle. He doesn’t give a damn about what we do, as long as the checks keep coming in.” Jess pulled out a cigarette.
mad Nobody supervises these kids! Not even the government agencies.


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The others laughed. “You’re wasting your time. Kent’s kissing up to the Sheriff’s daughter and bucking for a big fat college scholarship. He thinks he’s too good for us. Well, just see what a proud papa old man Harris is going to be when a piece of white trash asks to marry his daughter?”
mad They call this kids white trash. This are kids that the whole town knew their families and just because they are dead the town don’t care about them any more.



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He’d lost track of her, and there were so many things he wanted to tell her. She deserved to know his mistakes before someone else told her. There was no way he was going to be able to keep it from her.
:rolleyes: You better star talking!


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He hesitated. Love wasn’t something he could control; even after all these months what he had with Lilah was still fresh and new, . It filled a void he hadn’t even known he had, one that had open up on the night he’d learned of his parents death. It was powerful, in a way that he’d never expected.
eek He just needed to feel the love of his parents.


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Lilah put her finger to his lips. “We’ve talked about this before. Give them something to talk about, and they won’t look at what’s under their noses.”

“I can’t do this.” Clark insisted. “We’re hurting too many people.”
mad This woman probably did this with a very boy she tutors.

:rolleyes: Probably the hold town and her husband knew about it.

confused Was Trask already in Smallville?

confused Was he responsible for the Kent’s death?

More ASAP, please.

MAF


Maria D. Ferdez.
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Don't like Luthor, unfinished, untitled and crossover story, and people that promises and don't deliver. I'm getting choosy with age.
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