OH WOW!!!!
I can't believe it!! Luthor coming in like that... and Lois! What must be going through her mind as she starts to see everything, the *truth*, so clearly! Superman not being invulnerable AND being Clark, and Luthor being evil and Superman's mortal enemy. I mean, she must be on shock-overload, which you show perfectly, with her only saying a few things. And all we know is how she sounds to Clark saying them. The quick sentences are really powerful in this story. It gives the story a real sense of urgency, which is perfect, since it's being told from Clark's perspective, with him in a dire situation.
Off to find part 4
~Nicole
