David
I've just read parts one to three back-to-back. They're really rather wonderful. You know that, don't you?
You've managed to keep the tension up consistently and thrown in a few twists that I haven't seen anywhere else.
What I'm particularly impressed by is how you can say so very much in such a short amount of words. I'm astonished that this isn't a two-hundred page epic, given the amount of angst you've managed to lever in here.
Anyway... Wonderful stuff. And I want part four. Now.
Chris
