Good grief, it's like two separate stories at once!
I liked the first story. And then I liked the second story, but I'd hate to enjoy it at the expense of the first story. On the other hand, the second story has lots of great potential too. That leaves us readers kinda stuck, doesn't it?
The peacekeepers were
-- I could just see them blathering oh-so-helpfully and LnC exchanging increasingly confused looks. And why *are* Utopians so easily sucker-punched into giving the bad guy the upper hand?
Was that red K of some sort?
More more more, CC. Soon. Please?
Hazel
