Well, I'm with Karla on wanting the next part. I thought I might make a comment on the vagaries of feedback. Like I said, I read this in one gulp and so didn't comment on each part. This is do to timing of my personal life and not a reflection on the quality of writing. So I'm not sure less feedback as a story is winding down is really a sign of losing readers. I chimed in here because there was a discussion going on. Without that I might not have posted because others had already said what I wanted to say.
Artemis
