Diane, I've been meaning to post feedback on this ever since I read it a couple of days ago. I kept telling myself that, if I just waited a little longer, I'd be able to come up with the words I needed to tell you how amazingly good this section is. That I could arrive at a way to describe how I felt while reading it. That I would be able to express eloquently and articulately just how well you've written Lois and her internal tumble of thoughts and logic and bewilderment here, as well as Clark's reaction to the Kryptonite as seen through her eyes.
Well, I've thought and thought. And here's my comment:
WOW!! 
And now - please come back and get them out of this!!
And please get this story finished and on the archive by year-end so that I can include it on my Kerth list!
Wendy
