Great part!
I love the way you write Lois' inner babbling and the way you reveal Thompson's plot through Lois' reasoning.

I'm also very happy that although shocked Lois is still concerned for Clark and determined to save him. smile1

Waiting for Monday,
Avia

"I get it, you're a ghost. You're dead. Big accomplishment, move on. You see a light anywhere? Go towards it okay?"

Cordelia in 'Rm w/a Vu' - Angel episode 1x05