Wow, I'm surprised so many people think "behemoth" is a mostly unknown word. I know I've read it several times, and heard it plenty. However, for some odd reason, I always thought it was spelled "bohemoth", and had to run to dictionary.com to be sure!

I do have to agree with the article. Clear, concise sentences work better than long drawn out ones. They may be trying to draw the image, but sometimes the author draws a little too much.

"You need me. You wouldn't be much of a hero without a villain. And you do love being the hero, don't you. The cheering children, the swooning women, you love it so much, it's made you my most reliable accomplice." -- Lex Luthor to Superman, Question Authority, Justice League Unlimited