I love the fact you didn't put too much detail in the boxing story. It leaves much more space for L&C's introspection, and puts more emphasis on Lois's relationship with her father and Clark's support.

And for once, Lex didn't do anything horrible. Yet. <g>

And again, I really like the fact you created a friendship between them that's pretence free for once, and hero-worship free. Well, almost. wink

Julie (who is allowed to read part 5 now <g>)

Mulder: Imagine if you could come back and take out five people who had caused you to suffer. Who would they be?
Scully: I only get five?
Mulder: I remembered your birthday this year, didn't I, Scully?

(The X-Files)