Just starting this, back later...
Ok, it's later. Poor kids, whining things like, "I'm hungry, it's lunchtimmmmeeee..."
Here's what I love: how dialogue heavy this is! My favorite kind of storytelling.
And all of this is just note perfect. The hesistancy, the love that is always underneath. Lois telling Clark the hard things- about the clone, her ordeal, and she knows it hurts him, but they are so honest with each other.
How can you not root for these two great characters who are so good for each other and so well drawn in their motivations?
Wonderful! I know I've said this, but I dread the end...of this part...just saying.
CC
