I got yelled at on irc to hurry and read this (I intended to check this new effort of yours after I was done working -- finally under *un*retired status, Tank)... and now I see why. laugh

I began to read, unsuspecting, almost as if I'd forgotten it was a Tank-story and therefore bound to be evil

When I saw Lois's fake name was Wendy, I did start to worry. And then... *Kay*????? A *flower child*? With not one logical brain cell in her head? Oooh, Tank! I'm going to have to write about a pregnant and long-haired Jimmy just to get back at you for that! evil

Brilliant story anyway! But evil all the same!

Kaethel [Linked Image]

ps: Kathy and Wendy suggested I write about a long-haired and pregnant Lois marrying Jimmy instead... what do you think, Tank? wink

- I'm your partner. I'm your friend.
- Is that what we are?
- Oh, you know what? I don't know what we are. We kiss and then we never talk about it. We nearly die frozen in each other's arms, but we never talk about it, so no, I got no clue what we are.

~ Rick Castle and Kate Beckett ~ Knockout ~