Tank,
This was great! Haircut, bad guys, everything we could ask for...except maybe some smoochies?
I love it how you're the one always pushing Lois to get a haircut and your response to the challenge is to give her a
bad one! LOL!
Wendy said,
You said that the haircut had to be a positive experience for Lois, and somehow I doubt that she feels this one was... <g>
Actually, Wendy, he said
The haircut experience can either be a positive or a negative one, but it has to be a significant element in the plotline. We, the gentle reader, need to experience the action and the consequences. We need to share in Lois' thought processes before, during, and after.
(from
here ) So I'd say he followed the guidelines perfectly, if not a bit ironically.
And I agree with Tank, let's get this challenge to compete with TOGOM fics. :p
Bethy (who still has yet to come up with her own haircut idea...)