I already posted to the nfic boards but I wanted to post comments here, too.
Chris, I'm loving this story!! Dan and Lucy, who would have thought? And not only is your first part very funny (what with the terrible romance novel Lucy's reading and Dan's even more awful pick-up lines
), but it's also extremely insightful. You show glimpses of Lucy's personality that I had never stopped to think about, and it's very nice to discover yet another thing about the characters.
Thank you so much for sharing, and for the lovely dedication.
Kaethel
