Michael, another good instalment.
Lois was her classic self. I like your Henderson. It's fun to see the different versions of the cast of characters (whether they be L&C version or comic continuity) and the way you decide to use them.
The Batman cameo was good. It definitely shows the flavor of DC's current big hit... The Batman Superman comic book. Of course, as Wendy pointed out, this can be a liability to capturing readership. The comics aren't particularly popular with most L&C fans so the more comic continuity you include, the greater the risk of pushing away more potential gentle readers.
Me... I love it. I only wish the comics were written this well.
Looking forward to more.
Tank (who is glad that Clark/Superman did not kill)
