Wow, I want to read more.
I loved the description you used! Talk about dropping a reader right in the middle of the jungle with Lois. Then with Clark, you could almost feel his agony. *sigh* So close and yet so far away.
Post the next part soon, I'm hooked on this one and I'm not really familiar with the alternate universes...you may end up explaining it all to me through your story.
Yvette
