Interesting start to this story. Lois is uninjured and in fairly good health, voluntarily staying away for the sake of her family. When she gets back, it'll be interesting to see Lois' reaction to this Clark/Superman she's heard so much about.
Poor Clark. In this version, he's not even allowed to search for Lois, and neither is HG Wells. I do like the way Herb dropped the hint that Lois will someday show up. So Clark's left with an imaginary Lois. Wonder if this Lois meets up with his expectations?
Any idea if this will be a short, medium, or long story?
Keep up the writing!
