Woohoo! New part!

Back later with FDK.

Well... I’m back. But I’m staring blankly at the screen, trying to figure what I can write after this rollercoaster. I’m broken to pieces!

You didn’t even let them enjoy their honeymoon! Please, DJ, give them a break!

You’ve messed up their honeymoon so much that just a nfic part could make up for it. <hint, hint>

I hope you come back soon, or...

Andreia

Some wedding night! Shame! What some people make that poor couple endure on these boards. At least there wasn't that dramatic hospital scene I was secretly hoping for - will have to revisit SR for some suit-being-pulled-off-magnificent-chest action.

Could Clark have a serum-induced kidney stone? Will he be forced to pee out the remaining Kryptonite in solid form? OUCH.

PS. I smell an nfic honeymoon scene, clothes and all! Make Sue write it if you're not in the mood. It's not like she has anything else to do.

ohmygod .... first such a beautiful wedding *sigh*, not to forget the things in between and then you do the most horrible thing you probably could think of, huh?!

I really hope you don't let us wait too long for the happy (!) ending (I insist on reading a happy ending , ok?!)

That's the closest smiley that will glare at you, LOL.

Again, perfect, perfect, perfect, and BAM! Clark's out cold on the floor. I can picture all kinds of horrible scenarios, but some how I think you'll redeem yourself.

JD

Reading the part, I have relife.

The end of part have been my astonishment. So they won't have happiness easily. I'm sad for it(in a way I want to see their more difficult predicament and they find a way out of trouble. )

I expect next part.

(I'm sorry for my naughty English. But for the while I read L&C fanfic writer's good work. Because I'm so funny, happy for them, I dare write feedbacks. )

Okay, DJ...I don't have time for your foolishness! I'm trying to study and you go and pull this.

I'm gonna say that it is Kryptonite leaving Clark's body in the form of something like a kidney stone...my best nursing judgement. It is sort of the scenario that presents when one expels one.

What a "perfect" wedding. It was beautiful! Even Ellen and Sam were there and happy.

This was just so beautiful even if it was in the midst of passion. It was just a realization for both of them.
I'm sure that there were kinks to work out but the mere fact that they love each other made it the most wonderful experience that Lois and Clark have ever had. It's like they have shared their souls with each other.

Now that the urgency has passed...they didn't even get totally undressed the first time...they can slowly make passionate love.
DJ, this had better be a "kryptonite stone"!

~Sheila

Never ever apologize for posting a long part!

Just know that we will expect you to keep that up if you do that too often...

James

No!!!! NOOOOOO!!!! Nononono!!!!!



Clark is dying???? Again??? For real???

That's how part twenty ended, and we thought you had killed Clark. Well, luckily for you, young lady, you hadn't (crosses arms and taps foot). Clark was not seriously hurt at all...

Whew! Or...



(By the way, though, since I am the chairperson of the SPCBC - the Society for the Prevention of Cruelty to Buttons on Shirts - I must protest against this:

End of parenthesis >)

Okay, so we thought Clark was all right, didn't we? So what did you throw in our faces then, DJ? Huh? Huh?





Okay, Dr. Klein to the rescue - or at least, Dr. Klein to provide the explanation:

Hmmmm...<mutter> <grumble> Okay....

Or maybe... Dr. Klein to the rescue after all:

A vaccine? A cure for Kryptonite poisoning?



<pant>

Experimental. Now that sounds reassuring. :rolleyes:

Anyway, Clark got better, and Clark and Lois had a beautiful wedding. You surely made us feel that both of them looked stunning, and I was glad that both Sam and Ellen were there (and sitting together, to boot), and I loved that Perry married them! Ah, Perry!!!

(Of course, I didn't much like that Sam and Ellen "gave Lois away" as if she was a piece of property. Did Martha and Jonathan give away Clark?)

And, hmmm, just to postpone the horror awaiting us - you had me giggling just a little at the beginning of this part, when Lois found out that she was missing a small chunk of her hair. For a moment there I thought you would just briefly veer into Tank territory and give us a Lois haircut! Ah, well, better not - there is no way to be sure of Lois and Clark's health and well-being - or even survival - in a Tank story...

But then what did you do, DJ??? Did you turn this into a Tank story after all? A Tank story without the fun, the haircut, but complete with the deathly Tank ending???

Nooooo!!!! Nonononononono!!!!

My only hope is that Sheila is right, that Clark has "only" got a kidney stone. That hurts like the mother, I know - no, I haven't had anything like that myself, fortunately, but I know others who have. Perhaps Clark has even got a kryptonite stone?



Come back pronto, young lady!!! You've caused us enough grief and sorrow by now, so it's time for you to fix this!!! <wags finger> <taps foot>



Ann

/me joins Ann in the finger wagging and foot tapping.

DJ, DJ, DJ... Why do you play with our feelings so? *sniffs* Poor Clark... Poor Lois having to see him like that.

But I liked this part - it was in happier times!

Awww, so beautifully put, DJ! All of their life together...there in his eyes. *sigh*

Keeping her hands to herself - must have been very hard...

Oh, DJ! Come back soon with the final part! Don't let Clark die! Save Superman!

Please?

~Anna.

Dear DJ,

If you kill Clark Kent I will never make another video.... :p

Actually thats not really true but I figured I could try

PS I have been following this beautiful story! Well done!

~Lois Lane Wanna Be

DJ!!!!

Do you accept bribes? Threats? Entreaties? Really bad poetry? You just tell me what it's gonna take, and you've got it.

Of course, if you just didn't write so darn well, it wouldn't be so painful. This was another wonderful chapter, and like James, I'm not about to complain about the length. The ending yes, but not the length .

I'll be biting my nails until you post the next part!

Caroline, who is much too old for this kind of stress

I have passed very small kidney stones on two different occasions. I never saw the first one, but the second one felt like a nuclear submarine with the periscope extended.

When it finally popped out, it was less than a quarter-inch long and had four minuscule protrusions on one side, like four tiny little periscopes for four tinier little submariners out to torpedo my insides.

Both of them caused me to bleed like I'd been stabbed. And they both hurt like nobody's business.

So if Clark is trying to pass a Kryptonite kidney stone, the pain would probably be nearly unbearable. Add to that Lois's mortification at greeting Dr. Klein in her altogethers and having to tell the good doctor that Clark is Superman on her wedding night and you've got a ginormous (yes, that's a word) amount of WAFFy WHAM coming up in the next chapter or two.

Oh, thanks for not killing Clark in the beginning of the chapter. And thank you so very much for putting him in mortal danger at the end so all the FOLCs following your story will squeal and gnash their teeth. Me included.

Yes she is evil. DNA test results show she is really a clone of Lex Luthor!

Delightful part, nice wedding.

Is this your way of forcing Clark to trust Dr. Klein? Cause clearly if they had trusted him he'd have told them NO SEX till Clark finishes healing.

Andreia - LOL - A wedding and Almost 2 Funerals - ROTFLOL!!!

Actually, I started the chapter reassuring all of you that Clark wasn't dead... *ahem* Yeah, I know "splitting hairs" and all. <g>

Hey! He GOT a honeymoon, didn't he? It's not like he carried her through the doorway and then collapsed. <Babbles pouts - just can't please some people...>

Yes, I'll remind you that my teacher, Sue, made the first incision. <bats eyelashes at Sue> Love you, Sue. <g>

LOL!!!

I don't know what your native language is, but I followed your English just fine. I'm honored that you chose me to delurk and give some fdk to. Thanks.


Hi Sheila! My foolishness!? Whatever do you mean? I assure you... it was all Babbles.

I love your speculating. <g>

<whistles innocently...>

So glad you liked the wedding. And enjoyed the honeymoon... even if it was cut short...

<ducks head in shame... sort of...>

Hah! I laugh at thee... you didn't even send any pointy stick men or chainsaws... I'm not afraid. <g>

Well... maybe a little... Hee hee - thanks for the fdk, Sheila!!!


Hi James! Okay <makes notes - no apologizing for long parts> <g> I actually was just trying to warn people - so if they were hoping to fit in a "quick read" they would know this one was a little longer. But thanks. <g>

Oh... well, if you insist. <g> The final part is also at least 15 pages. Thanks for the fdk, James.


Ann!!! <squeals girlishly> You gave me a Calvin!!! <g>

Uhhhh... yeah... I'm gonna take a pass on that question. Next...

I wish I could take credit for it... but that was borrowed from the series. <g> But Lois saying that she didn't care if it was the church of the Three Stooges - that was mine. <g> Glad you enjoyed the wedding, Ann... as for the "giving away" - that's a fairly common practice in "southern" weddings. My parents "gave me away" at mine. Since Perry is "southern" (and Lois's parents were in attendence) I could see him asking that in the ceremony. It wasn't meant to be degrading... I assure you.

Heh - glad you enjoyed the "hair" part - it sort of just happened... I looked at it again after I wrote it and tweaked it a little and Then left it in, as a nod to Tank. <g> As to the "Tank" ending... well... you do know I've tried one of those once before (sort of) right? <g>

I love the guessing at what's wrong with Clark... I just love it, I tell ya. <g> Of course, I won't tell you if you're right or not though... yes, I'm just mean like that...

<singsong voice> Yes, Ms. Sibrant. <g> I'll turn in my final book report before Sunday.

Thank you for all that... er... lovely feedback, Ann. Hopefully the final chapter will be to everyone's satisfaction. <g> I'll be interested to see what you all think.

Not to burst your bubble - but there's only one part left <sniffles> yes, it's almost over. One last 15 page part and it's all done. Another story spanning parts of 4 months... I posted the first part on May 23rd.

Anyway...

ROTFLOL <snorting> Oh Terry! You are so very welcome - LOL - thank YOU for that. <g>


Hi Patrick!

<quick - run for it Babbles - they've figured us out!>

LOL!!!

Thank you, Patrick. Glad you enjoyed the part and liked the wedding.

Thank you for the fdk! As for your speculation... <g> Loved it...


Thanks go out to all of you for sticking with me through this ANGSTWAFF story. I've loved each and every comment dearly. Thanks for going along on the ride with me. I've had notes on this story since last year, and been writing it since last March (wow - where has the time gone). I'm glad you've enjoyed it and are looking forward to the last part... <sniffle>

See you all soon - BY SUNDAY. <g>

-- DJ

Geez, DJ, you really know how to ruin a mood!

Okay, so at first I was a little disappointed over the lack of angst over Clark being shot (I love, love, love the guy, but I also like watching him suffer. I'm a complete sadist.), but you certainly made up for it! The poor guy really can't get a break!

This chapter was so sweet, but by the end you had me like a baby. Come back and fix Clark!!!

Jessi

I don't know what to say - this part had so many different emotions. I felt like sitting in a roller coaster...

Again, I didn't expect the ending of this story. Clark really is scaring her again but I think more than he had at the beginning of the story YAY! Clark wasn't hurt. Then they had such a perfect wedding. Loved it! and then the evil end

hehe, I enjoyed that part!

omg no! What happened to Clark. You can't do this again to us, DJ, can you?

NOOOOOO! This was too short. Please tell me this is not true.
Hey if this is going to be a "NO HAPPY END" tell me now! I want to have a happy ending. Please!

DJ come back soon with a HAPPY END or

Heh. Boy, am I going to make you wish you'd never said that.

Stopping by Fanfic on an Angsty Evening
By Caroline (With deepest apologies to Robert Frost)

Whose tale this is I think I know.
It’s giving me an ulcer, though.
She should not leave her story here
After such a heartless blow!

These people are to me so dear
Her evil muse I’ve come to fear.
I beg for WAFF and no mistake
Oh, DJ, let me make this clear:

How much more do we have to take?
Wedding night angst! My heart might break.
It’s time to love, not time to weep.
A miracle cure Klein shall make!

The bribe I have would seem too cheap,
But this bad poem is yours to keep.
A new part now would help me sleep.
A new part now would help me sleep.

There. I'm pretty sure I just made the English teachers cry!

C.

On message boards did our DJ
a stately wedding-feast decree
where Ralph, with printer's ink on hands
through culverts measureless to man
with news to printers ran.
So many a yard of fertile news room ground
with flow'rs and garlands were girdled round
and placards telling wondrous news of yore
where many a famous reporter reverently stood
to see a thing as ancient as the time
a man and woman joined in holy matrimony.

But oh! that deep romantic chasm that opened
beneath our couple during their night of sacred wedded pleasure!
A savage place! as unholy and horrid
as e'er beneath a waning moon was haunted
By woman wailing for her super-husband!
And from this chasm, with ceaseless turmoil seething,
as if this earth in fast thick pants were breathing,
a mighty fountain momently was forced;
A fount of blood! in whose half-intermitted burst
huge fragments vaulted like rebounding hail
of kidney stones inside a ureter's canal!
And 'mid these dancing rocks of pain and torture
it flung up momently the blood-filled river
twelve inch's meandering with a mazy motion
through ripped and bleeding ureter it ran
then reached the porcelain cavern used by man
and sank down lifeless drain to realm of flushed-down gators
And 'mid this tumult readers heard from far
DJ's voice prophesying angst!

The shadow of our lovers' night of pleasure
floated midway on the waves
Where was heard the mingled measure
of the moans and pants and raves.
It was a miracle of rare device
after near sixty years of fiction'l celibacy!

A damsel with a dulcimer
in a vision once I saw:
It was a Lois Lanean maid
And on her dulcimer she played
singing of Clark Kent.
Could I revive within me
her symphony and song
To such deep delight 'twould win me
that with music loud and long
I would build that night of love
That lovely night! Those joys of love!
And all who heard would sense it there
And all should cry, Beware! Beware!
His chocolate eyes, his silky hair!
Weave a cricle round him thrice,
and close your eyes with holy dread,
for he on honey-dew has fed
and drunk the milk of Paradise.

(With huge, huge apologies to Samuel Taylor Coleridge... and I'm not absolutely sure what I wanted to say with this desecration of his wonderful poem. Except... how about you post the next part now, DJ?)

Ann

Ooooh, more fdk!

And a poem from Caroline???

Now, Barbara, when have you ever known me not to come through in the end with a happy ending? Hmmm? <g> I mean there's always a first time for everything...

What? I'm just saying...

<g>

Thanks for the fdk, Barbara!


Hi Caroline! A poem! Oh, happy days. This takes me way back - to highschool and creative writing class <giggles>

LOL!!! OMG! That was hilarious! You made me cry - but from tears of laughter.

That was too good! And you even got the rhythm and rhyming down <giggles girlishly> 8 count lines! And the 3rd line in the first stanza rhymes with the lines in the 2nd stanza and... wait! You managed to do that for each stanza! <squeals>

Eeee hee hee! I LOVED it! Too cute!

I don't know about the English teachers - but I wept tears of mirth! Thank you, Caroline!

-- DJ

***EDITED BECAUSE ANN SLIPPED IN****

Ann!!! <hugs>

ANOTHER POEM!!! Yippee!!! Wow! I'm on a role!

<sits down to read - will come back to comment in a bit>

.........

I'm back....

And I'm speechless! <yes, I know, difficult to accomplish with me - LOL>

WOW! Ann! How in the world? You guys amaze me! Hee hee hee - you're too much!

I have to say though, that this stanza was my favorite:

LOL!!!! 60 years of fictional celibacy <falls out of chair laughing and snorting> Oh, Ann! That was too funny...

However... you're right. I did at least allow them to get together... right? That's gotta make you happy, yes? I know how you hate to get jerked around by too much UST... well this sexual tension is no longer "unresolved" - eh? <g>

Thank you for the poem. I loved it! You guys sure know how to make a girl's head swell. And Babbles... well now she's refusing to share equal billing with Bubbles, stating that she's in an all together different league from her - there will be hell to pay now.

<snort> Apparentely I get silly on only 6 hours of sleep.

Anyway, thank you all so much! The fdk has been phenomenal... And those poems were just too much! <g>

I really think you all deserve to get the final part sooner than Sunday... but I really do want to wait and see what *BOTH* my betas have to say before I post it - waiting on one. <g>

So here's the deal - if I get the part back before Sunday, I'll post it sooner. <g> I know the poetry deserves more... but it's the best offer I've got.

C-ya all soon!

-- DJ

OMG, Wow, Yikes! I don't even know what to say after that. Beautiful, captivating, absolutely cruel. I love it all.

Jackie

Yikes!!! Poor baby!! That has to be the ultimate torture for Clark - passing a kryptonite kidney stone on his wedding night!!!!!

So we're supposed to hang around and wait til Sunday.....

If you don't have any takers, I'd like to give the nficcy honeymoon scene a go - with your approval, of course!!!!

Can't wait for the last part! This has been a wonderfully written story!!!!

Wow! You've managed to shock us again.

I loved the wedding. It was perfect! No clones, no crazy wedding destroyers, and H.G. Wells didn't interupt them on their wedding night! Just perfect!

But then you had to go and slam us with some more angst!

Me bows down to the queen. Great job!

Well, DJ, I was in such a hurry last time, so I need to change one of the stanzas, like this:

A damsel with a dulcimer
in a vision once I saw
It was our DJ, lovely maid
And on her dulcimer she played
and sang a song so heavenly
of Clark Kent and Lois Lane.

Okay, the rest should be the way it was before!

Ann

Wow... my first thought, DJ, is EVIL, EVIL, EVIL! How can you do this to us.... And I'm without internet until Monday! Need next part now!!!!

But the bad poetry!! That's a hoot!

Jo

Oh wow! More fdk! Eeeeeeeee!

Hi Jackie! I left you speechless? Oh goodie. <g> And I'll take that absolutely cruel as a compliment. Thanks Jackie!


Hi Missy! LOL at the picture - too funny. Wow - one person mentions that they think it might be kidney stones (okay, more than one) and then someone mentions the K... and now people are just running with it. Maybe it was just bad cake from the wedding shower??? LOL!

Yes, you are gonna have to hang around until I get my beta back... whether that's Sunday, who knows. <g> But by Sunday, I promise, one way or the other. <g>

Missy! I’m so flattered! I was actually just teasing when I said that. I never expected anyone to take me up on it. LOL. Um, to be honest, I REALLY don’t do nfic anymore – writing or reading it. One of my betas had actually teased me several times about me “fading to black” and not writing the nfic scenes and I told her that she could write them but she said she declined since I wouldn’t be reading them. <blush>

But I certainly won’t hold you back from writing it if you want to.

And thanks so much for your fdk – I’m tickled that you think it’s been wonderfully written. Thanks.


Hi Symbolic! Oh good, one last shock before the final post. That's always good. <g> Thanks - glad you loved the wedding. IMHO, it's how their real wedding should have been - friends and family with Perry marrying them. And I think it would have been cool to have had it at the Planet. <g>

The queen? No... no no no... I'm merely an apprentice! I don't want the pressure of being the queen. LOL! But thank you so much!


LOL Ann! Yes, that does make more sense. <still giggling at the poetry>


Hi Julie! How can I do this to you? Very easily... *cough*choke*sputter* I mean... I don't know! It was so hard. I felt miserable knowing how mean I was being... uh, yeah...

Ooooh, sorry about the internet! I might be able to post it a day early (no promises) it just depends... but not today, definitely not today. Sorry.

And I agree - the poetry was a hoot. <g>


Thank you all again so much! Babbles is just glutted on fdk. I'll have you know that she's so full she can't even get off the couch! <g>


-- DJ

I think everyone is overlooking the most obvious explanation.

Lois broke him.

Of course she did. Hey... Kryptonite's got nothing on Lois, you know. She even said so herself.

Heh. I can just imagine Lois explaining to Dr. Klein what has happened to Superman/Clark. ("Well, you see, first I started to undress him... and then I sort of attacked him with my mouth... I mean at first I only attacked his lips and tongue with my mouth, but later on I attacked other parts of him...." )

Ann

And then Dr. Klein fell off his chair, cracking his skull on the floor below...

Oh wait, I'm reading ahead.

(Somewhere, DJ, I hope you're crying.)

YAY! More Perry-love.

"Yummy" is just the right word!

Oh, God, those poor movers and that long-suffering landlady! DJ, you've made that little subplot so deliciously funny to me.

AHHH! DJ, you're going to be the death of me. And 22 isn't here yet! *whimpers* Please come back soon!

Only one more chapter left??

DJ I have really loved every bit of this story. ^_^ I can't wait to see the ending.

(I'm sorry I'm so terribly uninteresting in my reviews... I hope in the future I'm back to my old reviewing self. That just means you are going to have to write more though. Hahaha. *cough* *Sigh*)

Well, I guess that's the way that fic lore gets started... We readers are just trying to get past the 'almost two funerals' for our honeymoon hero. But I still like Sue's explanation best - Lois broke him!!! [insert nfic smilie here]

I'll see what I can do if there are any readers out there who want to read an interloper's scene. This might be good for my muse - she's been on vacation lately because of work, but I'll get it my best shot. Maybe I can get one of your betas to see if it passes snuff to be associated with your story.

Imagine my surprise when I popped on here and saw what was happening!!!



Sue!!! OMG!!! Do you know how hard I laughed at that? Seriously? Do you?

And then Lara went and added to the fun - yes, I guess Lois did set herself up for that one, didn't she? Little Ms. 'Kryptonite's got nothing on me' - LOL!!!

Oh, you guys.... <still snorting>

Oh no! Ann!!! LOLS! I could only imagine the look on Dr. Klein's face!

Yep, I imagine that's what would happen, Sue, but his face would turn 8 shades of pink first. <g>

PITCHFORCKS!?! Don't be telling them to hound me mercilessly yet... after all... you gave me some great suggestions and a few things I need to tweak before I can post. <g>

After that beta, yes, I was, I was CRYING. I was laughing so hysterically that I thought the neighbors might hear me. Seriously, I think I pulled an abdominal muscle I laughed so hard. OMG - too funny. Thank you so much!


Hi Lisa! You know, I just couldn't think of any other word to describe him but 'yummy' there. <g> Glad you liked it. And I'm tickled that you liked the parts with the movers and the landlady - I just really felt like if Lois had agreed to marry Luthor, she probably would have already closed her lease out and set up movers and what not... the show never showed us that - but it did seem to change the location of her apartment in her building from time to time. <g> And it always seemed to me like her apartment was just a one-bedroom... but in the pilot, it seemed a little bigger and Lucy was staying with her, so I would have thought she'd have had 2 bedrooms then. So it was just a fun little subplot to play with. <g> Glad you enjoyed it.

No... 22 isn't here yet... but I'm tweaking it right now - I have it back from both betas and I'm hoping maybe I can post it later... maybe even this morning. <g> Thanks for the fdk!


Hi Jojo! I'm so glad you've loved it. <g> I miss your reviews Jojo, I won't lie, but I'm also just happy that you popped in just to let me know that you're still reading and still loving it. Thank you!


LOL Missy - yes, I agree, Sue's explanation was great. She mentioned that explanation to me several times in the last couple of betas <snort> along with some other colorful lines that I just might have to share with everyone at the end of part 22 - I laughed so hard... I really should share...


Anyway, thanks again everyone! You have no idea how sad I'll be to post the final part tomorrow. Hmmm.... maybe I should hold on to it awhile... I could give myself time to acclimate to the idea that it's over... and...

OUCH!

<glares at Babbles>

All right, all right. I'll post it just as soon as I get my tweaking done. Sheesh!

<g>

But seriously, thank you. It's been a blast.

-- DJ

If that was a Kryptonite kidney stone, and we for some reason need to make Clark suffer even more, maybe you should make it so that the only thing that will fix it (other than passing it out whole) is break it with a laser... Clark's laser vision, to be more precise! Too mean? Would it still work? I don't know, but that was my truly evil thought of the day.

I tried to only skim the feedback, since I've only read the first few paragraphs of this part, but I wanted to make sure that you hadn't already gotten 500 comments pointing this out.

From part 20:
From part 21:
Hmmm... Is Lois following the cab in her Jeep? It seems like an awfully bad waste of cash, but if he's too wounded to move from the back seat, I can understand.

Sorry, but I made a mental note of where Lois' Jeep was because I was trying to convince myself that Lois had only consumed enough alcohol to feel the effects but not enough to impair her driving.

Now, I've interupted my reading for too long. I doubt I'll finish enough to comment further tonight, but I'll drop you a line when I'm done.

Elisabeth
who is disappointed she glanced enough in skimming feedback to know what's going to happen next.

Elisabeth you are one sharp cookie!!!

I'm so glad that you found this mistake. That's what happens when you go back and change something that you've written and then don't remember how it affects something later in your story. Towards the end of the story, I did a lot of changing and editing back and forth on a few items. I tried to read, and re-read everything to make sure it gelled, but obviously I didn't catch everything...

<sigh>

No... no one else caught it - or at least "told" me that they caught it. You take the blue ribbon. I'm so glad you did find it, though, that means I can fix it before the story goes to the archive. I've already submitted it but I haven't heard from my GE yet, so there's still time for me to fix this. <wipes brow>

Thanks Elisabeth! I hope you enjoy the part despite the mistake.

-- DJ

Edited -- <sigh> I was making the situation more difficult than it needed to be, huh? That was because I added that line about her Jeep being at Clark's apartment AFTER I wrote the part about the cab taking her back to her apartment to get her Jeep -- I forgot I wrote that part.

Therefore, when they get to STAR Labs to see Dr. Klein, this is what you should have read:

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When she had called Dr. Klein, he had told her to meet him at STAR Labs so he could examine Superman. She had called a cab to take them by Clark’s apartment where Clark could change into his Suit and then she could drive ‘Superman' to STAR Labs in her Jeep.
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Anyway, you didn't need that long drawn out explanation :p but at least it's fixed, anyway. Thank you Elisabeth!

-- DJ

Oh, and P.S., Elisabeth, thank you for the fdk you've been leaving me along the way - I'm so glad that you and James have been enjoying the story. Thank you!