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Posted By: VirginiaR FDK - First Kiss (1/1) - 02/01/12 01:10 AM
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I would like to thank Sue S. for inspiring me to get my WAFF on with her wonderful WAFFy story All I Want (For Christmas) . But I also need to thank my WAFF instructors: Bob B., Mrs. Luthor, Deadly Chakram, Tank, Artemis, and Mouserocks. I hope I did everything you told me. Once again, this story probably would have ended up on the cutting room floor if it hadn't been for my wonderful and talented Beta, IolantheAlias (hope you like the little extras I added since you last read it wink ).

Wow, all that gratitude is almost longer than my story. clap

If I succeeded at getting your Awwwwwwwwww, please let me know. If I didn't, please let me know where I lost it! grovel No writing exercise works, if one does not learn from ones mistakes. Thank you.
Posted By: stephnachia Re: FDK - First Kiss (1/1) - 02/01/12 07:59 AM
Oh yeah. That was some good WAFF. /happy sigh

I loved this more in touch with her feelings/confident Lois. For a second before she kissed him, I thought she was realizing he looked A LOT like Superman... shock

And I love that she didn't regret kissing him... though who knows what panic the morning may bring. wink

Write another WAFFY one please!!
Posted By: Ultra Woman Re: FDK - First Kiss (1/1) - 02/01/12 08:40 AM
You surely got it: [Linked Image]
This story shows that you're a good learner - you've got the right words and little touches that make it very WAFFy. [Linked Image] This fic is definitely on my list of WAFFy stories for next year Kerth! clap

Andreia
Posted By: MrsLuthor Re: FDK - First Kiss (1/1) - 02/01/12 10:15 AM
Helloooo WAFF!

Loved it, of course! I love a little WAFF to start my day. You def. nailed it! Good job, V!
Posted By: KenJ Re: FDK - First Kiss (1/1) - 02/01/12 10:17 AM
Very sweet and wonderfully WAFFY hyper

A lot of it sounded like it came straight from the series. Wonderful job!
Posted By: Mouserocks Re: FDK - First Kiss (1/1) - 02/01/12 12:33 PM
Aaaaaaaaawwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww!!!

laugh Great job! Loved the story and Lois' admission that Clark won out over Superman. For a moment there, though, I was worried that Clark's hard head had knocked some memories loose... but I guess it just knocked some sense into her. wink
Posted By: Lynn S. M. Re: FDK - First Kiss (1/1) - 02/01/12 12:36 PM
An excellent foray into WAFFYdom. You definitely applied well the advice give you in another thread.

Brava! clap
Posted By: jackiek Re: FDK - First Kiss (1/1) - 02/01/12 01:20 PM
Awww soooo sweet! I just love it. That is exactly what should have happened.
Posted By: Laurach Re: FDK - First Kiss (1/1) - 02/01/12 05:50 PM
I loved this. You did a fantastic job! More soon! Laura
Posted By: scifiJoan Re: FDK - First Kiss (1/1) - 02/01/12 05:59 PM
I'm not good on judging waffyness but this was a great way to start off February thumbsup

Joan
Posted By: VirginiaR Re: FDK - First Kiss (1/1) - 02/01/12 10:53 PM
Wow! Thanks for the response everyone. blush I'm glad to start your February off with a little romance.

Stephnachia: Sometimes it takes a little bump on the head to see what was in front of our eyes all the time.

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Write another WAFFY one please!!
blush Well, thanks. I'll add that request to my list.

The next story I'll be posting may cross the WAFF threshold, but only inadvertently. wink It will be everything I wrote to try to get to this scene (which is FINALLY how I pictured it in my head smile1 ), but ended up dropping on the cutting room floor due mostly to lunkheadedness, I won't say who's. laugh I remembered that 'Less is More' and that Sue S.'s story was only the one scene, so I dropped everything else but the one scene. Yea! It still worked! It posts closer to Valentine's Day for those requiring lunkheadedness and jump-the-shark humor with their romance. wink

Ultra Woman: blush Thank you. dance

Mrs. Luthor: Thank you. My pleasure to start your day with a shock Clark would probably end up thinking it was from the kiss. :rolleyes:

Lynn: Yes, Thank you! I had some great teachers.

Jackiek: Thank you. blush I always wondered what happened at the end of L&C's date that made her walk into her apartment with that secretive smile on her face. wink

Laura: Thank you. More coming (see above) soon.

Joan: Thank you. Glad you enjoyed.
Posted By: Anna B. the Greek Re: FDK - First Kiss (1/1) - 02/02/12 12:37 PM
Oh! I, too, thought that the hard bump made her realize that CK=S.

Great job with the WAFF! smile Keep it up!
Posted By: VirginiaR Re: FDK - First Kiss (1/1) - 02/02/12 09:59 PM
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Originally posted by Anna B. the Greek:
Oh! I, too, thought that the hard bump made her realize that CK=S.
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Great job with the WAFF! smile Keep it up!
Thank you, Anna.
Posted By: Deadly Chakram Re: FDK - First Kiss (1/1) - 02/03/12 04:03 PM
Whew! Finally made it in here to read. Better late than never...

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He felt satisfaction at Perry’s words; the Chief must mean them if he compared his reporter to Elvis.
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Luckily for him, Lois was good at filling silences.
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“Don’t you mean, without me you wouldn’t have your shiny new dust collector?”
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Her heart rate had doubled, trying to outrace his. Just like Lois – always having to win.
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What a great WAFFy tale! I think I have to go stand out in the cold night air for a few minutes though - that was some hot kiss!
Posted By: Artemis Re: FDK - First Kiss (1/1) - 02/03/12 08:19 PM
Most Excellent Story Award for a First Time WAFFER!
Very nice. Keep those thoughts coming. I felt the WAFF and the timing.
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Artemis
Posted By: IolantheAlias Re: FDK - First Kiss (1/1) - 02/03/12 08:50 PM
Thanks for the kind words.

Wonderful story! Definitely Kerth-worthy! You've got the romance down just right. Well done.
Posted By: VirginiaR Re: FDK - First Kiss (1/1) - 02/04/12 12:15 AM
Deadly Chakram: Thank you for all the smile1 FDK.

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<prods Virginia to use this as a jumping off point for the *other* side of the fan fics boards>
Let's just say this story is PG, the cutting room floor story is a bit more PG-13. laugh (See how I'm building it up; that way I'll be guaraunteed at least one razz for how groanworthy horrible it is wink )

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And once he learns it, he'll know 348 different languages?
But who's counting? wink

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Love this. And I love the section before - each kiss put into words, and why they weren't the "first kiss."
That eidetic memory has to be good for reminiscing. wave
Posted By: anonpip Re: FDK - First Kiss (1/1) - 02/05/12 03:16 PM
This was great and very WAFFy.

I loved this line -

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He could ride in the cab with her to her apartment and then float on home.
I wasn't sure if you meant literally or figuratively, but loved it mainly as it worked both ways.
Posted By: VirginiaR Re: FDK - First Kiss (1/1) - 02/05/12 09:40 PM
anonpip: Thank you. I find that many things that Clark says and does can be taken two ways. laugh It's part of his charm.
Posted By: Darth Michael Re: FDK - First Kiss (1/1) - 02/11/12 02:16 PM
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So, what do have here?
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Perry chuckled as he, Lois, and Clark walked out of the Awards banquet. In Clark’s arms he cradled the Kerth award for his story on the nursing home scandal.
Ooooh!

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Since the moment he had picked Lois up and saw her with her hair swept up off her neck and that black-as-the-night’s-sky evening gown, with that pendant on her décolleté. His eyes had been fixed on her all evening and his tongue tied.
wave Michael
Posted By: VirginiaR Re: FDK - First Kiss (1/1) - 02/11/12 08:00 PM
Michael: I snuck one in on you... actually two. laugh

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Oh, look. This is different.
Nah, I thought I'd just reguritate the scene from the show and see if anyone noticed. :p

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Oh. Oops. My bad.
GFic boards.

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Clark! What’s up with him? Is the shiny new dust-collector made of red crystal?
Nope. But why give her an extra chance to explode on him after making his night perfect? angel-devil

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That’s actually not a lie.
Superman's rubbing off on her... um... not literally.

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Down, boy.
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Adorable, little vignette, Virginia!
Thanks. The silly :rolleyes: version started posting last night.
Posted By: HappyGirl Re: FDK - First Kiss (1/1) - 02/14/12 07:37 PM
clap Delicious! clap
Posted By: VirginiaR Re: FDK - First Kiss (1/1) - 02/15/12 12:22 AM
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Originally posted by HappyGirl:
clap Delicious! clap
Thank you. Glad you enjoyed. laugh
Posted By: Darth Michael Re: FDK - First Kiss (1/1) - 02/19/12 11:57 AM
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Originally posted by VirginiaR:
Superman's rubbing off on her... um... not literally.
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Originally posted by VirginiaR:
Thanks. The silly :rolleyes: version started posting last night.
It's on my todo list. cat

Michael
Posted By: chelo Re: FDK - First Kiss (1/1) - 05/04/13 07:10 AM
Oh, I loved this!!!! There's nothing better than a WAFFY story for a Saturday morning! It brings me joy for the whole weekend!
Posted By: VirginiaR Re: FDK - First Kiss (1/1) - 05/04/13 02:16 PM
chelo: Thank you. smile1
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Oh, I loved this!!!! There's nothing better than a WAFFY story for a Saturday morning! It brings me joy for the whole weekend!
And nothing starts the weekend with a smile than FDK on an old story. I'm glad you enjoyed it.
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