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FDK: Cold Feet #96482 07/18/13 11:36 AM
Joined: Jul 2004 Posts: 295 Little Scotland SirRodStewFan OP Hack from Nowheresville
OP SirRodStewFan Hack from Nowheresville Joined: Jul 2004 Posts: 295 Little Scotland	Let me know what you think Thanks for the love Thanks for the guidance Thanks for the TARTAN PRIDE HA! Can't Stop Me Now - Rod Stewart - Time 2013

Re: FDK: Cold Feet #96483 07/18/13 12:43 PM
Joined: Jul 2003 Posts: 2,979 Likes: 11 Florida Queen of the Capes Pulitzer
Queen of the Capes Pulitzer Joined: Jul 2003 Posts: 2,979 Likes: 11 Florida	Ooooh, you sneaky, sneaky...um...sneak. You really had me worried, there. I tip my hat to you. ~•~

Re: FDK: Cold Feet #96484 07/19/13 06:03 AM
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mrsMxyzptlk Columnist M Joined: Mar 2013 Posts: 624 US	Wow, I like the twist. I was wondering why Clark would put up with Lois's behavior and give in to her. I couldn't see him happily spending the night with her and handing her over to another man for the rest of their lives. Much happier ending than I was expecting! Re-reading the story, everything they say takes on a different meaning. You did a great job on making me assume that she's marrying Luthor without actually directly implying it. "It is a remarkable dichotomy. In many ways, Clark is the most human of us all. Then...he shoots fire from the skies, and it is difficult not to think of him as a god. And how fortunate we all are that it does not occur to him." -Batman (in Superman/Batman #3 by Jeph Loeb)

Re: FDK: Cold Feet #96485 07/20/13 06:00 PM
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John Lambert Pulitzer J Joined: Aug 2012 Posts: 2,549 Detroit, Michigan	I have to admit on the first reading I was just shocked at what Lois was doing. However after getting though I went back and re-read it. I realized that not only was there no mention of Luthor, but that Clark's "what about ..." line totally works. He is about to say "what about waiting until the wedding night". I have to admit that on first reading I was shocked that Clark would make love to a women without telling her his secret. On second reading I realized this is because she already knows. John Pack Lambert

Re: FDK: Cold Feet #96486 07/25/13 04:19 AM
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HappyGirl Top Banana Joined: Aug 2007 Posts: 1,194 Likes: 1 Northern Indiana	Yep, you got us good! Well done. Just a note on British/American vocabulary. In American English, "vest" means something akin to the British "waistcoat." I believe what Lois was wearing was probably a tank top (for a woman; the same garment on a man would be an undershirt). I'm happy to see these little vignettes. I don't have time or energy to invest in open-ended epics these days. Keep writing! This is my happily ever after.

Re: FDK: Cold Feet #96487 07/25/13 08:16 AM
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AngelRose Blogger A Joined: Jul 2013 Posts: 41 Cork	Very clever!

Re: FDK: Cold Feet #96488 09/08/13 02:02 AM
Joined: Apr 2007 Posts: 8,948 Likes: 28 Darth Michael Boards Chief Administrator Nobel Peace Prize Winner
Darth Michael Boards Chief Administrator Nobel Peace Prize Winner Joined: Apr 2007 Posts: 8,948 Likes: 28	Quote “All right!” he called, opening the door. “Lois?!” His eyebrows raised in surprise seeing her at his door. “What are you doing here?” Is it wise to receive gests in just your underwear? Quote “I’m supposed to get married tomorrow,” she slurred. Lex? Quote “I’m getting married tomorrow. You’re my best friend, and I don’t want that to change. I’m freaking out. I don’t know if I’m doing the right thing.” There there. Quote “Lois…” he began, but she cut him off. Thrusting her tongue into his mouth, Lois kissed him hard. “Mmm… wait, wait! What are we doing?” he asked, holding up his hands to stop her. Michael Join us on the #loisclark Discord server! We talk about fanfic, our favorite show, life, and more! (It’s almost like the IRC days of old again!) I go by Michael on the Archives.

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