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FDK - Strange ReveLextions #94415 04/12/13 04:28 AM
Joined: Feb 2013 Posts: 103 The (not Hobb's) Bay U Ultra Lucille OP Hack from Nowheresville
OP Ultra Lucille Hack from Nowheresville U Joined: Feb 2013 Posts: 103 The (not Hobb's) Bay	Please put any feedback here! I hope you liked it! Ultra Lucille

Re: FDK - Strange ReveLextions #94416 04/12/13 06:34 AM
Joined: Jun 2011 Posts: 2,131 California Mouserocks Kerth
Mouserocks Kerth Joined: Jun 2011 Posts: 2,131 California	Nothing spoils a good story like the arrival of an eye witness. --Mark Twain

Re: FDK - Strange ReveLextions #94417 04/12/13 08:21 AM
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angelsgmaw Hack from Nowheresville Joined: Jan 2007 Posts: 238 FL	I love it! If you really think about it, Lois made the correct assumptions if we are talking about Lex. Good work! Please write us something else. Pat (angelsgmaw)

Re: FDK - Strange ReveLextions #94418 04/12/13 08:49 AM
Joined: Jul 2004 Posts: 776 floor 13 S SJH Features Writer
SJH Features Writer S Joined: Jul 2004 Posts: 776 floor 13	Clark's face almost gives him away, yet Lois looks right at him and dismisses what she sees.Fun story, good job. "I'm red-eyed, tired and drunk" Teri Hatcher "Fun will now commence" 7of9

Re: FDK - Strange ReveLextions #94419 04/12/13 08:58 AM
Joined: Apr 2003 Posts: 9,362 Scotland LabRat Boards Chief Administrator Emeritus Nobel Peace Prize Winner
LabRat Boards Chief Administrator Emeritus Nobel Peace Prize Winner Joined: Apr 2003 Posts: 9,362 Scotland	New authors are always welcome. And don't forget you can submit your story to the Fanfic Archive , now that it's done. LabRat Athos: If you'd told us what you were doing, we might have been able to plan this properly. Aramis: Yes, sorry. Athos: No, no, by all means, let's keep things suicidal. The Musketeers

Re: FDK - Strange ReveLextions #94420 04/12/13 12:37 PM
Joined: Apr 2011 Posts: 9,509 USA VirginiaR Nobel Peace Prize Winner
VirginiaR Nobel Peace Prize Winner Joined: Apr 2011 Posts: 9,509 USA	Lots of fun! Thanks for joining in on my comedy challenge. Congratulations on posting your first story. VirginiaR. "On the long road, take small steps." -- Jor-el, "The Foundling" --- "clearly there is a lack of understanding between those two... he speaks Lunkheadanian and she Stubbornanian" -- chelo.

Re: FDK - Strange ReveLextions #94421 04/12/13 02:26 PM
Joined: Aug 2012 Posts: 2,549 Detroit, Michigan J John Lambert Pulitzer
John Lambert Pulitzer J Joined: Aug 2012 Posts: 2,549 Detroit, Michigan	I love the story. I was totally not expecting the ending. All along I just figured that Lois was totally off base with her guess. John Pack Lambert

Re: FDK - Strange ReveLextions #94422 04/12/13 03:07 PM
Joined: Feb 2010 Posts: 4,393 Likes: 1 Delaware L Lynn S. M. Pulitzer
Lynn S. M. Pulitzer L Joined: Feb 2010 Posts: 4,393 Likes: 1 Delaware	Welcome, Ultra Lucille. What a phenomenal first post to make. I hope it is just the first of many. I so did not see that ending coming. And as is evident from much of my own fanfic, I especially love vignettes with surprise endings. Please send more our way. Incidentally, I also like your turns of phrase. The following, for example, struck my funnybone: Quote Clark's smile disappeared without a trace. Lois considered sending a search party after it, but decided that there was a more pressing issue at hand. Joy, Lynn

Re: FDK - Strange ReveLextions #94423 04/15/13 10:41 AM
Joined: Apr 2010 Posts: 3,661 Likes: 10 Somewhere on the East Coast Morgana Pulitzer
Morgana Pulitzer Joined: Apr 2010 Posts: 3,661 Likes: 10 Somewhere on the East Coast	Amazing first effort. You gotta write some more! Morgana A writer's job is to think of new plots and create characters who stay with you long after the final page has been read. If that mission is accomplished than we have done what we set out to do, which is to entertain and hopefully educate.

Re: FDK - Strange ReveLextions #94424 04/15/13 04:43 PM
Joined: Feb 2013 Posts: 103 The (not Hobb's) Bay U Ultra Lucille OP Hack from Nowheresville
OP Ultra Lucille Hack from Nowheresville U Joined: Feb 2013 Posts: 103 The (not Hobb's) Bay	Thank you so much for all your feedback! I'm glad you liked the story (especially given my loopyness while writing it ....) <g> Mouserocks: Quote It's a scary (but cool) thought that Luthor could do good in one outfit, then cause chaos in another... Me too! I pictured it as the Lex Luthor v. The Boss duality taken to the nth degree. Pat (angelsgmaw) Quote Lois made the correct assumptions if we are talking about Lex. Exactly! I never liked how long it took Lois to see who Lex really was. VirginiaR Quote Does he [Clark] know who Superman is and is trying to keep is secret from Lois, because he knows what the man will do if anyone figures it out? I wanted to leave it up to interpretation. I saw two main possibilities: (1) that Clark knew 'Superman's' secret identity (and Luthor's propensity for evil) and was clumsily trying to deflect Lois, or (2) that Luthor had somehow unknowingly gotten powers from Clark (lightning strike, maybe?) and Clark was trying to figure out how to protect his secret. John Lambert: Quote I love the story. I was totally not expecting the ending. Thanks! I'm so glad it worked... Lynn S.M. Quote I especially love vignettes with surprise endings. Me too! Thanks! Morgana: Quote You gotta write some more! I'll certainly be trying! -- Ultra Lucille Ultra Lucille

Re: FDK - Strange ReveLextions #94425 05/12/13 09:03 AM
Joined: Apr 2007 Posts: 8,948 Likes: 28 Darth Michael Boards Chief Administrator Nobel Peace Prize Winner
Darth Michael Boards Chief Administrator Nobel Peace Prize Winner Joined: Apr 2007 Posts: 8,948 Likes: 28	Hi Lucille! Welcome to the boards. You’re another evil one, aren’t you? (good thing, BTW) Michael Join us on the #loisclark Discord server! We talk about fanfic, our favorite show, life, and more! (It’s almost like the IRC days of old again!) I go by Michael on the Archives.

Re: FDK - Strange ReveLextions #94426 05/14/13 04:49 PM
Joined: Feb 2013 Posts: 103 The (not Hobb's) Bay U Ultra Lucille OP Hack from Nowheresville
OP Ultra Lucille Hack from Nowheresville U Joined: Feb 2013 Posts: 103 The (not Hobb's) Bay	Ooh! More feedback! Quote Quote "So who do we know who does a lot of altruistic acts for our community but clearly wants his actions noticed?" /points at Bruce Wayne/ Good one! I never thought of that! Quote Quote Outside the Daily Planet, Superman hovered. He hadn't intended to listen in on Lois's conversation with her new partner (Kemp, wasn't it?), but when he heard her mention his new name Thanks for the feedback! Ultra Lucille

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