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Please put any feedback here! I hope you liked it!

I love it! If you really think about it, Lois made the correct assumptions if we are talking about Lex.

Good work! Please write us something else.

Pat (angelsgmaw)

Clark's face almost gives him away, yet Lois looks right at him and dismisses what she sees.Fun story, good job.

New authors are always welcome.

And don't forget you can submit your story to the Fanfic Archive , now that it's done.

LabRat

Lots of fun! Thanks for joining in on my comedy challenge. Congratulations on posting your first story.

I love the story. I was totally not expecting the ending. All along I just figured that Lois was totally off base with her guess.

Welcome, Ultra Lucille. What a phenomenal first post to make. I hope it is just the first of many.

I so did *not* see that ending coming. And as is evident from much of my own fanfic, I especially love vignettes with surprise endings. Please send more our way.

Incidentally, I also like your turns of phrase. The following, for example, struck my funnybone:

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Clark's smile disappeared without a trace. Lois considered sending a search party after it, but decided that there was a more pressing issue at hand.

Joy,
Lynn

Amazing first effort.

You gotta write some more!

Thank you so much for all your feedback! I'm glad you liked the story (especially given my loopyness while writing it ....) <g>

Mouserocks:

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It's a scary (but cool) thought that Luthor could do good in one outfit, then cause chaos in another...

Me too! I pictured it as the Lex Luthor v. The Boss duality taken to the nth degree.

Pat (angelsgmaw)

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Lois made the correct assumptions if we are talking about Lex.

Exactly! I never liked how long it took Lois to see who Lex really was.

VirginiaR

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Does he [Clark] know who Superman is and is trying to keep is secret from Lois, because he knows what the man will do if anyone figures it out?

I wanted to leave it up to interpretation. I saw two main possibilities: (1) that Clark knew 'Superman's' secret identity (and Luthor's propensity for evil) and was clumsily trying to deflect Lois, or (2) that Luthor had somehow unknowingly gotten powers from Clark (lightning strike, maybe?) and Clark was trying to figure out how to protect his secret.

John Lambert:

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I love the story. I was totally not expecting the ending.

Thanks! I'm so glad it worked...

Lynn S.M.

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I especially love vignettes with surprise endings.

Me too! Thanks!

Morgana:

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You gotta write some more!

I'll certainly be trying!

-- Ultra Lucille

Hi Lucille! Welcome to the boards.

You’re another evil one, aren’t you? (good thing, BTW)

Michael

Ooh! More feedback!

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"So who do we know who does a lot of altruistic acts for our community but clearly wants his actions noticed?"

/points at Bruce Wayne/

Good one! I never thought of that!

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Outside the Daily Planet, Superman hovered. He hadn't intended to listen in on Lois's conversation with her new partner (Kemp, wasn't it?), but when he heard her mention his new name

Thanks for the feedback!