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More!!! It was short!! Jose 
"Practice up your shielding spells...and remember to duck if you see green light coming your way." Harry Potter to Wizengamot in OotP trial A Bad Week in the Wizengamot
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Hi, Great part.  More ASAP, please. MAF 
Maria D. Ferdez.
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Don't like Luthor, unfinished, untitled and crossover story, and people that promises and don't deliver. I'm getting choosy with age.
MAF
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I wonder, does this qualify as 'thinking too much'?  Another really short instalment, but one filled with a lot of introspection that leads Lois to a fateful decision. It will be interesting to see how her decision is received by Clark and the others, and if her resolve can stande agains their negative reactions. Tank (who thinks that a nice haircut for Lois would be a good way for her to declare her new independence and change of life station)
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DON'T YOU DARE, TANK! Don't make me get Kaethel on your back -- I'm sure it would take little to no persuasion  Thank you all for the kind compliments! I'm glad this story is as well-received as it has been, and I know that the parts are small, but truthfully can you expect anything less from me? Thought not. More to come shortly... I swear! -Jo 
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Pulitzer
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hi. i haven't been reading much new fic lately, but decided to take the time to look at some recent posts. just caught up on this story. glad i did. your posts are short, but i like the story. cool premise, and you have a talent for gripping introspection. i'm looking forward to seeing where this goes. come on, lois, talk to him! Paul
When in doubt, think about penguins. It probably won't help, but at least it'll be fun.
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Pulitzer
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Jocelyn An excellent part!  But she's doing too much thinking.  Hopefully she'll realize that she needs to talk to Clark. I'm thoroughly enjoying this and look forward to reading the next part. Tricia 
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Okay, I'm amused by her conviction that Mayson is a crook, just because she looks twice at Clark.  But her honestly in realizing that she did exactly to Clark what she thinks Clark is now doing to her... Wow. Such inner honestly in Lois is quite rare. Beautifully done. Still too short. Nice cliffhanger, though.  Give us MORE! Hazel
Lois: You know the deal.
Clark: Superman gets the guys in capes, Lois and Clark get the guys in suits.
-- Action Comics 827
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Too short, Jo!!!  But now that she's seen the light, will she try to fight for her man instead? Wendy (who will be very  if part 3 is as short as the previous two!  )
Just a fly-by! *waves*
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Top Banana
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Very nice introspection, Jo! But it's way too short! Please post more and longer parts soon!
And yay for the friend that let you use her computer! Hopefully she'll stay that nice so we won't have to wait that long again...
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I tawt I taw a puddy cat!
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Top Banana
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I guess it would be redundant to say this was short.
It was, Jo, but also, really, really good.
CC
You mean we're supposed to have lives?
Oh crap!
~Tank
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Jo,
excellent part - too short
merry
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