FDK-I Feel Like Letting Go [2/6] - 11/14/03 01:08 PM
More!!!
It was short!!
Jose
It was short!!
Jose
Re: FDK-I Feel Like Letting Go [2/6] - 11/14/03 01:23 PM
Hi,
Great part.
More ASAP, please.
MAF
Great part.
More ASAP, please.
MAF
Re: FDK-I Feel Like Letting Go [2/6] - 11/14/03 04:57 PM
I wonder, does this qualify as 'thinking too much'? 
Another really short instalment, but one filled with a lot of introspection that leads Lois to a fateful decision.
It will be interesting to see how her decision is received by Clark and the others, and if her resolve can stande agains their negative reactions.
Tank (who thinks that a nice haircut for Lois would be a good way for her to declare her new independence and change of life station)
Another really short instalment, but one filled with a lot of introspection that leads Lois to a fateful decision.
It will be interesting to see how her decision is received by Clark and the others, and if her resolve can stande agains their negative reactions.
Tank (who thinks that a nice haircut for Lois would be a good way for her to declare her new independence and change of life station)
Re: FDK-I Feel Like Letting Go [2/6] - 11/14/03 06:13 PM
DON'T YOU DARE, TANK! Don't make me get Kaethel on your back -- I'm sure it would take little to no persuasion 
Thank you all for the kind compliments! I'm glad this story is as well-received as it has been, and I know that the parts are small, but truthfully can you expect anything less from me? Thought not.
More to come shortly... I swear!
-Jo
Thank you all for the kind compliments! I'm glad this story is as well-received as it has been, and I know that the parts are small, but truthfully can you expect anything less from me? Thought not.
More to come shortly... I swear!
-Jo
Re: FDK-I Feel Like Letting Go [2/6] - 11/14/03 07:13 PM
hi. i haven't been reading much new fic lately, but decided to take the time to look at some recent posts. just caught up on this story. glad i did. your posts are short, but i like the story. cool premise, and you have a talent for gripping introspection. i'm looking forward to seeing where this goes.
come on, lois, talk to him!
Paul
your posts are short, but i like the story. cool premise, and you have a talent for gripping introspection. i'm looking forward to seeing where this goes.come on, lois, talk to him!
Paul
Re: FDK-I Feel Like Letting Go [2/6] - 11/16/03 12:47 AM
Jocelyn
An excellent part!
But she's doing too much thinking. 
Hopefully she'll realize that she needs to talk to Clark.
I'm thoroughly enjoying this and look forward to reading the next part.
Tricia
An excellent part!
But she's doing too much thinking. Hopefully she'll realize that she needs to talk to Clark.I'm thoroughly enjoying this and look forward to reading the next part.
Tricia
Re: FDK-I Feel Like Letting Go [2/6] - 11/16/03 02:02 AM
Okay, I'm amused by her conviction that Mayson is a crook, just because she looks twice at Clark. 
But her honestly in realizing that she did exactly to Clark what she thinks Clark is now doing to her... Wow. Such inner honestly in Lois is quite rare. Beautifully done.
Still too short. Nice cliffhanger, though.
Give us MORE!
Hazel
But her honestly in realizing that she did exactly to Clark what she thinks Clark is now doing to her... Wow. Such inner honestly in Lois is quite rare. Beautifully done.Still too short. Nice cliffhanger, though.
Give us MORE!
Hazel
Re: FDK-I Feel Like Letting Go [2/6] - 11/16/03 06:22 AM
Too short, Jo!!! 
But now that she's seen the light, will she try to fight for her man instead?
Wendy (who will be very
if part 3 is as short as the previous two! 
)
But now that she's seen the light, will she try to fight for her man instead?Wendy (who will be very
if part 3 is as short as the previous two! )
Re: FDK-I Feel Like Letting Go [2/6] - 11/16/03 06:43 AM
Very nice introspection, Jo! But it's way too short! Please post more and longer parts soon!
And yay for the friend that let you use her computer! Hopefully she'll stay that nice so we won't have to wait that long again...
Saskia
And yay for the friend that let you use her computer! Hopefully she'll stay that nice so we won't have to wait that long again...
Saskia
Re: FDK-I Feel Like Letting Go [2/6] - 11/17/03 08:45 AM
I guess it would be redundant to say this was short.
It was, Jo, but also, really, really good.
CC
It was, Jo, but also, really, really good.
CC
Re: FDK-I Feel Like Letting Go [2/6] - 11/18/03 07:52 AM
Jo,
excellent part - too short
merry
excellent part - too short
merry