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Yay, Robin! And update!  I think I like Lane. He's a cutie. I think the only thing I'd change is some sort of formatting change or something to set it apart for the flashback because I had to read it more than once to figure out what was going on. I'm looking forward to the next chapter.
“Rules only make sense if they are both kept and broken. Breaking the rule is one way of observing it.”
--Thomas Moore
"Keep an open mind, I always say. Drives sensible people mad, I know, but what did we ever get from sensible people? Not poetry or art or music, that's for sure."
--Charles de Lint, Someplace to Be Flying
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Loved this chapter. It was very sweet all around. Laura
Clark: “If we can be born in an instant, and die in an instant, why can’t we fall in love in an instant?”
Caroline's "Stardust"
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What a wonderful chapter! Delicious sexual tension between Lois and Clark... and the family reunion was perfect! "Don't cry, Daddy. I'm a really good boy." Awww...  So well done!! Enjoyed it immensely!
Reach for the moon, for even if you fail, you'll still land among the stars... and who knows? Maybe you'll meet Superman along the way. 
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I am so glad that you decided to not let us wait! I loved the reunion between Clark and his parent and him meeting Lane
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Delightful part! Looking forward to seeing Clark really become a part of his family again.
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