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Posted By: BrightFeather FDK--Everywhere 11 - 01/30/11 08:46 PM
Yay, Robin! And update! clap I think I like Lane. He's a cutie. I think the only thing I'd change is some sort of formatting change or something to set it apart for the flashback because I had to read it more than once to figure out what was going on. I'm looking forward to the next chapter.
Posted By: Laurach Re: FDK--Everywhere 11 - 01/30/11 09:13 PM
Loved this chapter. It was very sweet all around. Laura
Posted By: Framework4 Re: FDK--Everywhere 11 - 01/30/11 10:38 PM
Well done
Posted By: mozartmaid Re: FDK--Everywhere 11 - 01/31/11 12:43 AM
What a wonderful chapter! Delicious sexual tension between Lois and Clark... and the family reunion was perfect!

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"Don't cry, Daddy. I'm a really good boy."
Awww... whinging

So well done!! Enjoyed it immensely! clap
Posted By: DW Re: FDK--Everywhere 11 - 01/31/11 12:46 AM
I am so glad that you decided to not let us wait!

I loved the reunion between Clark and his parent and him meeting Lane clap
Posted By: TOC Re: FDK--Everywhere 11 - 01/31/11 06:12 PM
Delightful part! Looking forward to seeing Clark really become a part of his family again.

Ann
Posted By: Darth Michael Re: FDK--Everywhere 11 - 02/01/11 12:47 PM
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Michael
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