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FDK - From the Outside (1/1) #74763 10/24/10 05:40 AM
Joined: Feb 2010 Posts: 4,393 Likes: 1 Delaware L Lynn S. M. OP Pulitzer
OP Lynn S. M. Pulitzer L Joined: Feb 2010 Posts: 4,393 Likes: 1 Delaware	As always, all comments welcomed. Joy, Lynn

Re: FDK - From the Outside (1/1) #74764 10/24/10 08:40 AM
Joined: Jul 2003 Posts: 2,977 Likes: 11 Florida Queen of the Capes Pulitzer
Queen of the Capes Pulitzer Joined: Jul 2003 Posts: 2,977 Likes: 11 Florida	Interesting; much more academic than I was expecting. Even so, it's good to know that Clark will be keeping an eye on Jeff. ~•~

Re: FDK - From the Outside (1/1) #74765 10/24/10 09:59 AM
Joined: Oct 2010 Posts: 24 Where ever the wind takes me Plain Jane Blogger
Plain Jane Blogger Joined: Oct 2010 Posts: 24 Where ever the wind takes me	I like how Superman decides to break his facade and open up to the boy to show Jeff just how much he does understand the loneliness. Great companion piece.

Re: FDK - From the Outside (1/1) #74766 10/24/10 10:41 AM
Joined: Dec 2005 Posts: 2,018 Portland, Oregon, USA F Framework4 Kerth
Framework4 Kerth F Joined: Dec 2005 Posts: 2,018 Portland, Oregon, USA	Delightful, however it is clearly going to blow up in his face. Quote Although it would be dangerous for Jeff to be known publicly as Superman’s friend, I don’t think it would be too risky for me to stop by on occasion to see how he is doing. I can see the headline on the "National Tattler" Quote Superman a Super Pedophile Framework4

Re: FDK - From the Outside (1/1) #74767 10/24/10 03:02 PM
Joined: Apr 2003 Posts: 4,058 NY Laurach Pulitzer
Laurach Pulitzer Joined: Apr 2003 Posts: 4,058 NY	Nice story! Clark: “If we can be born in an instant, and die in an instant, why can’t we fall in love in an instant?” Caroline's "Stardust"

Re: FDK - From the Outside (1/1) #74768 10/25/10 10:29 AM
Joined: Feb 2010 Posts: 4,393 Likes: 1 Delaware L Lynn S. M. OP Pulitzer
OP Lynn S. M. Pulitzer L Joined: Feb 2010 Posts: 4,393 Likes: 1 Delaware	Mary, I hope the story approach didn't prove too disappointing. Plain Jane, thank you, and welcome to the MB. Patrick, unfortunately, you are probably right about the Tattler and the Whisperer -- if they should catch wind of Clark's visits, they undoubtedly would portray an innocent act in such a salacious, fallacious manner. And it is a sad commentary on our society that these rags' RL counterparts not only make enough money to stay in business, they apparently make enough to justify their getting prime real estate near stores' cash registers. Laura, thank you for leaving feedback. I'm glad you enjoyed it. Joy, Lynn

Re: FDK - From the Outside (1/1) #74769 10/25/10 10:47 AM
Joined: Jul 2003 Posts: 2,977 Likes: 11 Florida Queen of the Capes Pulitzer
Queen of the Capes Pulitzer Joined: Jul 2003 Posts: 2,977 Likes: 11 Florida	Quote Originally posted by Lynn S. M.: Mary, I hope the story approach didn't prove too disappointing. Sorry if I sounded disappointed; I think it was mainly the sipping-soda-while-thinking-it's-coffee effect. I hadn't expected Clark to be acting so deliberately on Jeff's behalf. It makes sense, though. The other thing that bothers me is that the mini-epilogue at the end seems to negate the need for a sequel. ~•~

Re: FDK - From the Outside (1/1) #74770 10/27/10 05:05 PM
Joined: Feb 2010 Posts: 342 Arkansas D Deja Vu Beat Reporter
Deja Vu Beat Reporter D Joined: Feb 2010 Posts: 342 Arkansas	Glad to see Clark's POV! That's sweet that Clark plans to keep such a careful eye on Jeff. I love the comparisons with Lois--and it was interesting to see Clark's frustration with Lois's Superman love.

Re: FDK - From the Outside (1/1) #74771 10/27/10 07:23 PM
Joined: Jun 2006 Posts: 3,166 The Bluegrass State Classicalla Pulitzer
Classicalla Pulitzer Joined: Jun 2006 Posts: 3,166 The Bluegrass State	Ah! Here it is. Quote Going to visit Lois as Superman is like getting a fix for a crack addict: I pay for my few minutes’ high with a subsequent low, Great line! You did a nice job of making Jeff’s story (Looking In) have a completely different feel than this one. What I mean by that is that Jeff’s story was in language that a smart nine-year-old would use while Clark’s story is in language that he would use. Quote I have a sort of “spiritual x-ray vision. Awesome. Quote the mini-epilogue at the end seems to negate the need for a sequel. Nah! I can see it now. Jeff grows up, goes to work at The Planet (like Jimmy), finds out Clark’s secret, and.... ~~Even heroes have the right to dream.~~

Re: FDK - From the Outside (1/1) #74772 10/28/10 07:21 AM
Joined: Feb 2010 Posts: 4,393 Likes: 1 Delaware L Lynn S. M. OP Pulitzer
OP Lynn S. M. Pulitzer L Joined: Feb 2010 Posts: 4,393 Likes: 1 Delaware	Mary, I'm glad that the story itself wasn't disappointing. I don't have any ideas for a sequel at the moment, but I am not ruling it out entirely. If my muse cooperates and gives me one, I would be delighted to write it up. Deja Vu, Thank you! I had enjoyed having Jeff be like Clark in some ways and like Lois in others. Nancy, You picked out two of me favourite lines from the story. Thank you! And I'm pleased that the narrators' voices for the two were sufficiently different. And thanks again for GE-ing Looking In. I'll be submitting From the Outside to the archive soon... Joy, Lynn

Re: FDK - From the Outside (1/1) #74773 10/28/10 03:20 PM
Joined: Jul 2003 Posts: 2,977 Likes: 11 Florida Queen of the Capes Pulitzer
Queen of the Capes Pulitzer Joined: Jul 2003 Posts: 2,977 Likes: 11 Florida	Quote Originally posted by Lynn S. M.: but I am not ruling it out entirely. If my muse cooperates and gives me one, I would be delighted to write it up. Hooray! ~•~

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