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Let me know what you think please.


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Good part!! smile1

How can you cut there? :p

A minor edit... there are no "" in the dialogues frown

more soon!!! wave


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Hi,

Great part. smile1


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An interesting part, though a bit too tantalising (=too short). wink

Definitely looking forward to Lois's response to having just woken up on the wrong side of the castle with a 'beast' as drill sergeant,
and Clark's reaction to the knowledge that "the love of his life" is in his castle and having a taste of his ogre act.

More please. smile1

Thanks.

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I'd sure love to see this finished. Beauty and the Beast is my favorite fairy tale. I also have read many versions, my favorite being Robin McKinley's "Beauty". I never would have thought of it in an L&C light, but really, it's the same story. Clark wants Lois to see the *real* him, not the guy in tights/beast.


thanks!

rkn

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