Comments: Lois and the Beast part 4 - 10/21/03 09:09 AM
Let me know what you think please.
Re: Comments: Lois and the Beast part 4 - 10/21/03 09:22 AM
Good part!! 
How can you cut there? :p
A minor edit... there are no "" in the dialogues
more soon!!!
How can you cut there? :p
A minor edit... there are no "" in the dialogues
more soon!!!
Re: Comments: Lois and the Beast part 4 - 10/21/03 01:49 PM
Hi,
Great part.
Great part.
Re: Comments: Lois and the Beast part 4 - 10/22/03 08:14 AM
An interesting part, though a bit too tantalising (=too short). 
Definitely looking forward to Lois's response to having just woken up on the wrong side of the castle with a 'beast' as drill sergeant,
and Clark's reaction to the knowledge that "the love of his life" is in his castle and having a taste of his ogre act.
More please.
Thanks.
Definitely looking forward to Lois's response to having just woken up on the wrong side of the castle with a 'beast' as drill sergeant,
and Clark's reaction to the knowledge that "the love of his life" is in his castle and having a taste of his ogre act.
More please.
Thanks.
Re: Comments: Lois and the Beast part 4 - 07/06/07 07:49 AM
I'd sure love to see this finished. Beauty and the Beast is my favorite fairy tale. I also have read many versions, my favorite being Robin McKinley's "Beauty". I never would have thought of it in an L&C light, but really, it's the same story. Clark wants Lois to see the *real* him, not the guy in tights/beast.