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Stay Away From Amber Waves Of Grain Pt One - Comments #6280 09/14/03 12:46 AM
Joined: Apr 2003 Posts: 9,362 Scotland LabRat OP Boards Chief Administrator Emeritus Nobel Peace Prize Winner
OP LabRat Boards Chief Administrator Emeritus Nobel Peace Prize Winner Joined: Apr 2003 Posts: 9,362 Scotland	Quote “Fascinating, truly; I’m going back to sleep.” Oh, she's bad. Well, this is interesting. I can tell that CountryGirl!Lois is going to be fascinating - and very amusing - to watch. Loved the banter - had to LabRat Athos: If you'd told us what you were doing, we might have been able to plan this properly. Aramis: Yes, sorry. Athos: No, no, by all means, let's keep things suicidal. The Musketeers

Re: Stay Away From Amber Waves Of Grain Pt One - Comments #6281 09/14/03 12:55 AM
Joined: Apr 2003 Posts: 3,644 North Carolina, USA ChiefPam Pulitzer
ChiefPam Pulitzer Joined: Apr 2003 Posts: 3,644 North Carolina, USA	lol, Jo, this is adorable! Love the banter, and their sexy teasing relationship, and their mutual uncertainty about it... can't wait for part two! PJ "You told me you weren't like other men," she said, shaking her head at him when the storm of laughter had passed. He grinned at her - a goofy, Clark Kent kind of a grin. "I have a gift for understatement." "You can say that again," she told him. "I have a...." "Oh, shut up." --Stardust, Caroline K

Re: Stay Away From Amber Waves Of Grain Pt One - Comments #6282 09/14/03 12:56 AM
Joined: Apr 2003 Posts: 2,992 Sydney Australia T TriciaW Pulitzer
TriciaW Pulitzer T Joined: Apr 2003 Posts: 2,992 Sydney Australia	Jocelyn A great start! Your characterizations are spot on. I'm enjoying this immensely and look forward to reading the next part. Tricia

Re: Stay Away From Amber Waves Of Grain Pt One - Comments #6283 09/14/03 03:10 AM
Joined: Apr 2003 Posts: 4,058 NY Laurach Pulitzer
Laurach Pulitzer Joined: Apr 2003 Posts: 4,058 NY	Very cute! More soon. Laura Clark: “If we can be born in an instant, and die in an instant, why can’t we fall in love in an instant?” Caroline's "Stardust"

Re: Stay Away From Amber Waves Of Grain Pt One - Comments #6284 09/14/03 02:44 PM
Joined: Apr 2003 Posts: 3,846 Puerto Rico mariadferdez. Pulitzer
mariadferdez. Pulitzer Joined: Apr 2003 Posts: 3,846 Puerto Rico	Hi, Great piece. MAF Maria D. Ferdez. --- Don't like Luthor, unfinished, untitled and crossover story, and people that promises and don't deliver. I'm getting choosy with age. MAF

Re: Stay Away From Amber Waves Of Grain Pt One - Comments #6285 09/15/03 12:02 PM
Joined: Aug 2003 Posts: 57 Canada Jocelyn Brant Freelance Reporter
Jocelyn Brant Freelance Reporter Joined: Aug 2003 Posts: 57 Canada	Hi all! Thank you for the generally good feedback I've gotten for this story. I'd like to address the epilogue issue . I included this in the story, primarily because I felt the story was too Waffy for my tastes. Yes, in retrospect, it did ruin the story, and should I decide to submit it to the archive, I'll remove it. Generally speaking, I wasn't thrilled with the outcome of this story: it didn't please me, but I posted it anyway. Meh, it happens. But I apologize to anyone who felt that the epilogue was too much, unnecessary, or just plain ruined the story. I'll try better next time . Thanks again guys, for your readership

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